I think that the review is fine in what it said. However, it needs to do it much more succinctly. The editor of a magazine would cut it down somewhat. Reviews on fora (forums) need to be even shorter. Here, attention spans are less and many people read a forum using portable devices and so posts need to be short.
To be succinct myself, a good review here should be no larger than 1/3 the size of your review.